Here is my first edit of a snippet of Robyn. Today I showed a group of my target audience, and received some feedback on what they thought. This was a great way to take the advice on board and change or improve on some things before submitting the final one to suit my target audience more.
Here is some of the feedback I had:
- Some shaky establishing shots at the beginning
- Put music in that builds tension
- Short sound out to make level
- Great acting, and sequence is conveyed well
- Nice variation of shots used
From this I can develop on the editing, and maybe re-film some shots that were too shaky. Also I will add some music and level out the sound.
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