Sunday, 18 December 2011

MAIN TASK - DIARY ENTRY 2

Today I went to Spalding and during the car journey I was thinking about shots for the car scene in my production. So I used my phone to film some practice shots and had a play around with different shots of the road and put them on youtube.
It was a good day for filming I thought, I didnt film until the ride back so it got a bit darker, but the sky was really clear and the sun was bright, which hopefully when I come to filming for the real thing, it will be like that.
I like some of the shots I did, some are quite different and artistic, which are some shots I would like to involve into my production.







Thursday, 8 December 2011

MAIN TASK - DIARY ENTRY

Today I finished my first draft of my script, after a long discussion with my media teacher, I have decided agaisnt using the brain transplant as the reason for his flashbacks. We annoted the script together, brainstorming more ideas, I came to the conclusion of an idea.

Unshown background story
  • James couple years ago killed someone
  • His father (being a therapist/ hypnotist) hypnotised James into forgetting what he's done
  • James is now beginning to have memories return to him from his past
The new storyline
  • James has a dream about someone being killed
  • He tells his parents about it, they tell him its nothing to worry about
  • He then begins having flashbacks when he's awake
  • He then visits the forest that is in his vision
  • His parents chase him to the forest to stop him (audience think its them)
  • James begins having vivid flashbacks of the murder, untill he realises it was him

Tuesday, 6 December 2011

SCRIPT DRAFT


          FADE IN.
          1. EXT. FIELD - NIGHT
          establishing shot of sun setting

          2. INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT
          PAN:
          JAMES is sleeping and having a nightmare, he tosses and
          turns in bed. There are flashes of his dream cut between.

                                                     CUT BETWEEN

          DREAM SEQUENCE - FOREST
          POV:
          someone running through a forest being chased by an
          anonymous man.
                                               END DREAM SEQUENCE

          3. INT. DINING ROOM - DAY
          JAMES and his parents SUZANNE and MICHAEL are sitting
          quietly as they eat breakfast in an awkward silence.

                              JAMES
                    I've been having weird dreams
                    lately

                              SUZANNE
                         (interested)
                    What's that then hunny

                              JAMES
                    Well its just this one recurring
                    dream about being chased in a
                    forest at night

          SUZANNE looks liable and puts down her orange juice

                              SUZANNE
                    Oo that sounds like a nightmare,
                    what's the forest like?

                              JAMES (O.S)
                    Urm...

                              SUZANNE
                    I mean do you recognise the forest?
          MICHAEL starts cutting his fry up vigorously

                              JAMES
                    Not really, its too dark to see
                    much. But I feel like Ive been
                    there
                         (BEAT)
                    I feel like it was real.

          SUZANNE looks down at her breakfast and sighs. She bites her
          cheek, thinking about if what shes about to say is the right
          thing.
                              SUZANNE
                    Well there's something we haven't
                    told you about -

          MICHAEL clenches his jaw and looks towards SUZANNE



                         (O.S)

          JAMES looks at his parents alarmed

                              JAMES
                    What... What do you mean? What
                    haven't you told me?

                              SUZANNE
                    Well, you see, the thing is, you
                    needed the brain transplant
                    urgently, and the only donor on the
                    list was the boy that was killed in
                    fairview forest.

          MICHAEL starts digging at his food

                              JAMES
                    Oh, I think you missed a big part
                    out of my surgery then guys! You
                    all lied to me!

          SUZANNE sighs and looks to MICHAEL

                              SUZANNE
                    Michael...

                              MICHAEL
                    Look James, we thought it was the
                    right thing not telling you. It
                    wasn't important at the time, the
                    important thing was getting you
                    healthy again

          JAMES has his head in his arms on the table

                              JAMES
                    So what do you think this has to do
                    with my dreams?

                              SUZANNE
                    Well Dr. Moore did say side effects
                    of this type of surgery could bring
                    back certain memories from the
                    donor.

          MICHAEL slams down his knife and fork

                              MICHAEL
                         (Shouting)
                    Suzanne! He's just having
                    nightmares, he's a kid! His mind is
                    full of imagery, he's been out of
                    school for over a year now, it's
                    got to occupy his somehow!

          MICHAEL starts collecting plates and gets up

                              MICHAEL
                    How stupid are you? Thinking he's
                    having memories from a dead person,
                    someone who's in the ground, stop
                    scaring the boy

          MICHAEL walks out

          SUZANNE puts her hand on JAMES remorsefully

                              SUZANNE
                    James, I'm not trying to scare you,
                    it's just I've been waiting for
                    this day to come ever since Dr.
                    Moore said. All I can say is, when
                    you have these dreams, write or
                    draw them down and maybe we can do
                    something about it.

          JAMES and SUZANNE hug

          4. INT. KITCHEN - DAY
          SUPER: "3 WEEKS LATER". JAMES is in the kitchen with a glass
          of milk. He has a flashback again and drops the milk.
                                                      CUT BETWEEN

          FLASHBACK SEQUENCE - FOREST
          POV:
          falling over and hides behind a tree. The anonymous man is
          more visible and is looking for the victim, with a baseball
          bat.
                                           END FLASHBACK SEQUENCE

          JAMES is on the floor with a nosebleed after the flashback.
          He then gets up angrily

          5. INT. BEDROOM - DAY - MONTAGE
          JAMES bombs into his bedroom
          JAMES messes up his room by pulling duvet off
          JAMES pulls books out of shelf
          JAMES pulls his hair
          JAMES rummages through draws and paper
          JAMES grabs paper and begins to scribble picture on them
          JAMES starts pinning pictures to the wall
                                                      END MONTAGE

          JAMES is sitting holding his head, breathing heavily.
          SUZANNE comes in the room and see's JAMES and the pictures
          he drew.
                              SUZANNE
                    Come with me

          LEAVING SEQUENCE - MONTAGE
          EXTREME CLOSE UP:
          SUZANNE pulls drawings off wall
          SUZANNE stamps note on fridge
          SUZANNE grabs keys
          SUZANNE shuts car door
          SUZANNE puts keys in ignition

          6. EXT. ROAD - DAY
          extreme long shot of the side view from car

          7. EXT. FOREST - DAY
          SUZANNE and JAMES are walking through the forest, JAMES in
          front.
                              JAMES
                    This is where my dream is, how did
                    you know?

                              SUZANNE
                    This is where your donor was
                    murdered...
                         (looks up)
                    Fairview forest

          JAMES cringes in pain and holds his head and has a flashback

          FLASHBACK SEQUENCE - FOREST
          POV:
          Looking around, breathing and panting as they run more
          through the forest.
                                           END FLASHBACK SEQUENCE

                              SUZANNE
                         (yells)
                    JAMES!

          JAMES stands there delusional with a nose bleed

          8. INT. KITCHEN - DAY
          MICHAEL walks in to kitchen from work, he reads the note on
          the fridge, drops his brief case and runs out
          EXTREME CLOSE UP: of the note

          9. EXT. FOREST - DAY
          JAMES is sitting, SUZANNE kneels next to him giving him a
          bottle of water.

                              JAMES
                    Mum, I'm fine. C'mon lets keep
                    walking

          10. INT. CAR - DAY
          MICHAEL is driving as fast as he can to get to the forest

          11. EXT. FOREST - DAY

                              JAMES
                    So they never found who killed my
                    donor?

                              SUZANNE
                    No, but your saying you have seen
                    him in your flashbacks?

                              JAMES
                    Well there's someone after me in
                    them, I just can't make out their
                    face

          JAMES stops suddenly

                              SUZANNE
                    James?

          SUZANNE looks at JAMES and see's his nose bleeding
                                                      CUT BETWEEN

          FLASHBACK SEQUENCE - FOREST - MONTAGE
          POV:
          Running through forrest
          JAMES is fitting
          Looking back and seeing murderer
          MICHAEL's feet running through forest
          Running feet through forest
          Falls over
          JAMES is fitting on the floor
          Looks up and see's murderer (MICHAEL) with baseball bat
          Flashes of being hit by baseball bat
          MICHAEL's feet running through forest
                                            END FLASHBACK MONTAGE

          JAMES wakes up from flashback on the floor and see's his dad
          MICHAEL standing above him, he realises his dad was the
          murderer.
                                                        FADE OUT.

                    - your brain surgery, and maybe
                    your nightmares have something to
                    do with it